MG: Waiting Chapter 19
Hello Beautiful, how are you
all....first of all thanks a lot to motivate me and bear me too. Today's song
is the reason to write this SS. I know nobody knows punjabi song but believe me
that is perfectly suited song for DEV CONDITION. I really want to know how many
of you feel pity on Dev....Today.....
And I want you all replace DEV TO MAAN and then write comment. I
only want to read your view point..... Nothing else..Hope I'm demanding.
A HARSH REALITY
Chapter 19
Maan couldn't believe his ears after so many months of waiting
finally he hears those magical word from her.
"Please say it again"
"I love you" She said
One more time Geet
"I love you Maan, I really do....Cross my heart" she said
with pure honest and full of confidence.
"I love you Geet..... I love you so much" he tightly hugs
her
That hugs turns to passionate one both doesn't know. A cough broke
their hug.
Dev comes to meet Geet as he needs a friend but when he saw them hugging
like that somewhere something broken inside him. He knows whatever he is
feeling is crab but still he feels that.
"So sorry to disturb you" he said
Geet is embarrassed for so many reasons.... On the other hand Maan is
not at all.
"Maan Bhai first of all this is for you" he gives him a
card and added, "Please come there"
"For sure Dev"
He left but Geet feels something bothering him.... But she has more
important business than anything.
Geet wants to leave but Maan hold her hand.
"Where are you going....after this beautiful confession"
he said
Geet is red due to know his condition as well as her too. How
couldn't she know that he is half na###.
"I....I....am....Means....Vo..... I.think Daadi Maa needs
me"
He pulled her towards him and her back is comes in contact with his
bare form.
He is driving her carry and his close proximity let her forget the
other things like their Room door is open and anyone can barge in.
"Maan" she moans
Her way to taking his name let him forget what he want to say next
or tease her.
He touch her skin which is turning cold due to rising hotness....
(coz of me). Maan also lose his control over herself.
"I think Daadi Maa Grandson needs you more" he said lost
in her.
Maan take his own time to melt her more or more in his arms. She
only lose herself and let her body depending on him.
He is also taking full advantage of this situation and devour her
with his lips or nose not let her skin untouched which is bare.
She couldn't control anymore of his sweet assault and turns around
and hides herself in him.
They stand like there God knows how many seconds turns to minutes or
hours.
Maan comes out from hugs and saw her closed eyes or pink cheeks or
heart her heartbeat which is beating coz of him or for him.
He kissed her eyes, nose, ears or cheeks one by one and it's turns
darker shade of red. Without wasting anymore time....He capture her lips for
the passionate kiss.
Scene Shift
Dev is in big shocked not coz he witness that, they are husband or
wife so it's normal but his heart pained coz of that somewhere.
He doesn't understand why he feels miserable or unwanted or someone
pluck the soul from his body.
His health is already getting poor and poor but today he is stressed
so much.
He somehow reached his office. He is doing his work mechanically without
expression of happiness.
Today's is the big day for him but he is not at all happy.
He feels like he lost something very precious from his life.
Scene Shift
Maan or Geet lost in their newly found feeling which they both sure
of and wants to take one step ahead.
"Geet" she heard Daadi Maa but Maan is still lost.
She pushed him and he stumbled a bit "Ji Daadi Maa" she
said as she is already in room.
"I think I comes in wrong timing" she tease and so much
happy to saw the scene where Geet pushed Maan, her experience tells her what
they are doing.
"No Daadi Maa" Geet said without meeting her eyes with
Daadi....Her lashes is lower
She kissed Maan or Geet forehead and said, "I know you both are
not hungry but this old lady is, so comes here to disturb you both for breakfast"
she again
"We are coming Daadi Ma" he tries to act bold but still he
is shy.
She laughs loud.... Left them embarrassed.
Geet also runs away from there before he caught her again. Her
heartbeat raises and she knows too her face will scarlet.
Scene Shift
His health is affected with lots of stressed. He was in deep
thinking while stepping stare... He slips and fell from some stares.
"DEV" Meera scared who is waiting for him in his cabin.
She comes here to talk to him.
She immediately gives him first aids and checks him...He is fine....Due
to fear or stress he is unconscious.
Scene Shift
Geet is wearing a beautiful red saare according to her hubby wish.
He purchased for her and asked to wear this for the concert.
Maan also dressed in his white 3 piece suit looks like he wants to
kill someone with his dating killer looks.
Maan saw her and kissed her...After her confession he kissed her so
many time whenever he get time. Geet today knows how much passionate he
is....with his only kisses.
Looking sexy
"Shut Up Maan" she didn't expects this at least and
feeling coy with him for the first time as she confessed and they goes like perfect
couple.
"Let go" he said while kissing her red cheeks and laughs.
Scene Shift
Dev said first word before opening his eyes, "Geet" Meera
is so shocked with that
She is hurts so much with his indifferent behaviour.
"Dev" he looks at her strangely with blanched her internally,
"Are you fine" still she manage to ask
Sir, if you are not fine then we will postpone today's event.
He is quite.
"I think Dev needs rest" she said
"No, Now I'm alright" he said.
His eyes looks at her with so much accusations.
"Dev"
"I need to go" he said
Scene Shift
(Do listen this song... I'm putting on my blog as I know it's. I
know it's punjabi and many of okay all maybe doesn't know punjabi but it is
best suited song and this is song which inspire me to write this SS.... And I
want to know what will be your comments if I interchange the position of Dev
and Maan...actually want to read your comments on this...as I only read Dev is
like this or that but want to know, no one feel pity on Dev.....He is never at
fault....But let see what is your views)
Scene Shift
"All the best Dev" Geet says a smiles comes on his lips
but next moment it's replace with unreadable emotions...
Geet and Maan comes back stage first to gives him good wishes then they will sit
on their seats.
She comes close to him and shocked to know he is drunk...."Dev"she
said and he hugs her
"Dev" Maan said roughly
"Oh sorry She is your
wife." He said I thought she is my
wife Geet.
"I'm so sorry.....I'm so sorry" he repeats and went from
there with so much accusing filled voice.
Geet fears comes true as she doesn't ignore his voice or words.
Mike is set and all are shunned to saw his condition, Dev never drunk
but he is today....What will happen today.
Sir are you fine?
"I'm" he said a word and left to the stage.
Kaash
Lyrics
Kaash
assi mill jaande, vichore naa aande
He is accusing the person who is responsible for all. He wants the
person never leaves him.
Te
naina vassde na, te loki hassde naa
He said all are laughing or his own soul laughing on him.
Je
aisa ho jaanda, te Rab tera ki jaanda
He is accusing God too why he did this with him....Why?
Oh
mera ban janda, main tera ban jaanda
If the person is his only then he will be happy or only blackness is
there.
Je
dil nu launda na, kade pachtaunda na
He is feeling everyone ditched him and he is alone. He felt like he
did mistake to love her.
Ai
lagiya laake te baitha chain gawaa
Now he is restless and he will be restless till his last breathe.
Samajh
menu aave na kyun ronde zaaro zaar
Now he felt what real pain....is THE scene of them together and
happy makes him realised how unbearable pain is this.
Jina
de seene de vich vasda koi yaar (x2)
Love only gives pain today he realized that. He knows its destiny
fault but why he lost his precious gift.
Lokan
diyan gallan utte keeta na yaqeen
He remembers when his parents forced her or he remembers the time
when she came to her and wants to say from her eyes but he did not understand that
time and now.
Dhokhe
saare hunde enj shaklon haseen
He feels like she betrayed him as she didn't wait for him and easily
moved on with other.
Dil
hi na mile phir kade hun gile
He knows that were together for mare attractions and now it's over.
Muk
gayaa soniye ni tera mera scene
And now they both are over with each other coz they are moved on...
Gal
hun dil de na wasdi rahi
He recalls the time when she tells him how much she loves him and
she loves him for years.
Rohnda
reha main tu hansdi rahi
He saw her blushing face with Maan and here he is crying on the other
side she lived happily
Muk
gayi kahaani hun aaj saadi dil jaani
He believes that their story is over long ago and he is feeling pain
or restlessness.
Paira
vichon meri ni tu khich lai zameen
She is responsible for his condition. Ground slips from his feet and
he doesn't know how he will survive without her.
Samajh
menu aave na kyun ronde zaaro zaar
He has tears in his eyes along with person who are listening to him.
Pure pain and his helplessness or restlessness only reflected from his
painful voice.
Jina
de seene de vich vasda koi yaar (x2)
Geet is now sure, he regains his memory and Maan too....He can feel
that... That time and now his voice tells them the real story bit questions is
how.
Producer also get shocked coz it's is not the song he was singing
today but they get good responses so they are quite.
Todeya
hi jiven mera dil soniye
He accused so many people and said today's hos heart break and he
feels the pain.
Duniya
hi gayi meri hil soniye
His entire world is shaken up with the thought and now he had
nothing to live....He lost everything. Which is his?
Vekhdi
khudai tu samajh na paayi
He doesn't comprehend what to do and people with listen and can
imagine what his condition is.
Tenu
vi na jaana kuj mill Soniye
He cursed the people who brings darkness in his life.....They also
didn't get happiness in their life.
Jivein
aaj roya main tu kal rovegi
Today's he is crying for his fate....which gives him immense pain
for life time.
Yaadan
vich meri har pal rovegi
He cursed that person also cried for the love one too.
Hath
naiyo aane guzre zamaane
Today he is on worst condition but later it will happen to them too.
Hijr
di agg vich har pal rovegi
He knows Geet cries for him and today he cried for her but couldn't she
wait for him, she moved on so easily.
Tere
bin reh laange judaaiyan seh laange
He promised that he will try to survive without her aka person and
bear all the betrayal or pain.
Teriyan
yaadan de dilaase lai laange
Her memories are enough for him to spend his entire life.
Geet or Maan feels that and the audience too....Today he sung with
his heart which shows his pain to all...and bring tears in their eyes.
Dil
nu samjha laange te kasama paa laange
He said he will makes himself understand that the person is not more
his but someone else. He promised too
Raat-din
ro laange par na karaange pyaar
He will cry days or nights for lost his love of his life but he is
not able to love someone else now.....He has enough for this life....
Samajh
mainu aave na kyun ronde zaaro zaar
All person till now cried and his eyes are also wet with fresh tears
which he carries from long back
Jina
de seene de vich vasda koi yaar (x2)
He sings last night and fell on his knees....
So many person felt bad for him....Meera, Maan, their parents or
Daadi Ma....Everyone life shaken up.....The reality the bitter and it's spread
in everyone life and leave it's bitterness.
After ending song he faints on stage....and everyone like shunned......
Ignore Grammatical Mistakes or Other.
I give my 100% in this update and want the same.... Do gimme me more
like here or on my blogs I don't care but I want everyone take initiatives or......
I don't write next part....for sure.....That I'll assure you in advance.
Take Care.
none is at fault it was their destination
ReplyDeletenow she had moved on with Maan
Dev has his own life n a kid to think abt
forgetting is not easy but sometime to move on u hv to forget even if someone think u r cruel as they don't know d hell u hv been through n the pain u hv went through
n i love that song
but i think when geet was waiting for him this songs suits her
Ijazat by Falak
Ve jan walia enj chhad ke na javi
Kite vaade sare oh tor nibavi
Galan ishq di kitian sang ratan kadia
Oh bhull na javi meinu chhad na javi...
Haayeee...
Haayeee
Mera yaar sajjan tun dildar sajjan tun
Meinu kol luka le gal sine la le
Ghar aja mahi fer na ja mahi
Tere tarie pava teinu kinj samjava
Ik wari aja ghar phera paja
Koi labh ke liade mere dil da ranjha
Rabb teri khudai mein deva duhai
Oss bekadre nu meri kadar na aai
Bahan kangna pake hathe mehndi lake
Kanni mundra pake hun kehnu dikhava
Chann edi charia tun ghar na mudia
Rava tak tak teria akhaa rondian meria
Ve tun samj na paia man ishq machaia
Ve mein ho gai challi rovan beh ke kalli
Ve mann le kehna dukh hor ni sehna
Deva dil nu tasalli rova beh ke kalli
Kinj badal gia tun dil khed gia tun
Hasse hasia de vich dil tod gia tun
Ve jan walia enj chhad ke na javi
Kite vaade sare oh tod nibavi
Galan ishq di kitian sang ratan kadia
Oh bhull na javi meinu chhad na javi...
Haayee... Haaayeeee...
Je hove ijazat teri kara ibadat..
Destiny is very twisted ands its ways are more unexpected. I really feel pity for dev he he can't blame geet for that as she did have her heart break and now life has given her a second chance. Maan to deserves geet as he was patient in love and truly waited. No one is actually at fault .
ReplyDeleteTime is the best healer. It' said when God gives pain, he even gives the strength to endure it.
I'm being too philosophical in my comments. On whole I loved this update
WOW!! Outstanding update….I loved it…sorry for late comment... I am not well...just returned to IF after 15 days...
ReplyDeleteemotional update...
ReplyDeleteone side happy that geet confessed her love to maan n moved on...she is finally happy...
other side dev got his memories back....feeling really bad for him...noone is at fault,,,its fate who did this,,,,1st he forgot abt geet n when she moved on finally dev got memory back....nobody to blame bt fate...
hopefully as time healed geeet's wound time will heal dev too....
Dona(crazyeyes)