MG: Waiting Chapter 19



Hello Beautiful,  how are you all....first of all thanks a lot to motivate me and bear me too. Today's song is the reason to write this SS. I know nobody knows punjabi song but believe me that is perfectly suited song for DEV CONDITION. I really want to know how many of you feel pity on Dev....Today.....
And I want you all replace DEV TO MAAN and then write comment. I only want to read your view point..... Nothing else..Hope I'm demanding.

A HARSH REALITY


Chapter 19

Maan couldn't believe his ears after so many months of waiting finally he hears those magical word from her.

"Please say it again"

"I love you" She said

One more time Geet

"I love you Maan, I really do....Cross my heart" she said with pure honest and full of confidence.

"I love you Geet..... I love you so much" he tightly hugs her

That hugs turns to passionate one both doesn't know. A cough broke their hug.

Dev comes to meet Geet as he needs a friend but when he saw them hugging like that somewhere something broken inside him. He knows whatever he is feeling is crab but still he feels that.

"So sorry to disturb you" he said

Geet is embarrassed for so many reasons.... On the other hand Maan is not at all.

"Maan Bhai first of all this is for you" he gives him a card and added, "Please come there"

"For sure Dev"

He left but Geet feels something bothering him.... But she has more important business than anything.

Geet wants to leave but Maan hold her hand.

"Where are you going....after this beautiful confession" he said

Geet is red due to know his condition as well as her too. How couldn't she know that he is half na###.

"I....I....am....Means....Vo..... I.think Daadi Maa needs me"

He pulled her towards him and her back is comes in contact with his bare form.

He is driving her carry and his close proximity let her forget the other things like their Room door is open and anyone can barge in.

"Maan" she moans

Her way to taking his name let him forget what he want to say next or tease her.

He touch her skin which is turning cold due to rising hotness.... (coz of me). Maan also lose his control over herself.

"I think Daadi Maa Grandson needs you more" he said lost in her.

Maan take his own time to melt her more or more in his arms. She only lose herself and let her body depending on him.

He is also taking full advantage of this situation and devour her with his lips or nose not let her skin untouched which is bare.

She couldn't control anymore of his sweet assault and turns around and hides herself in him.

They stand like there God knows how many seconds turns to minutes or hours.

Maan comes out from hugs and saw her closed eyes or pink cheeks or heart her heartbeat which is beating coz of him or for him.
He kissed her eyes, nose, ears or cheeks one by one and it's turns darker shade of red. Without wasting anymore time....He capture her lips for the passionate kiss.

Scene Shift

Dev is in big shocked not coz he witness that, they are husband or wife so it's normal but his heart pained coz of that somewhere.

He doesn't understand why he feels miserable or unwanted or someone pluck the soul from his body.

His health is already getting poor and poor but today he is stressed so much.

He somehow reached his office. He is doing his work mechanically without expression of happiness.
Today's is the big day for him but he is not at all happy.

He feels like he lost something very precious from his life.

Scene Shift

Maan or Geet lost in their newly found feeling which they both sure of and wants to take one step ahead.

"Geet" she heard Daadi Maa but Maan is still lost.
She pushed him and he stumbled a bit "Ji Daadi Maa" she said as she is already in room.

"I think I comes in wrong timing" she tease and so much happy to saw the scene where Geet pushed Maan, her experience tells her what they are doing.

"No Daadi Maa" Geet said without meeting her eyes with Daadi....Her lashes is lower

She kissed Maan or Geet forehead and said, "I know you both are not hungry but this old lady is, so comes here to disturb you both for breakfast" she again

"We are coming Daadi Ma" he tries to act bold but still he is shy.

She laughs loud.... Left them embarrassed.

Geet also runs away from there before he caught her again. Her heartbeat raises and she knows too her face will scarlet.

Scene Shift

His health is affected with lots of stressed. He was in deep thinking while stepping stare... He slips and fell from some stares.

"DEV" Meera scared who is waiting for him in his cabin. She comes here to talk to him.

She immediately gives him first aids and checks him...He is fine....Due to fear or stress he is unconscious.

Scene Shift

Geet is wearing a beautiful red saare according to her hubby wish. He purchased for her and asked to wear this for the concert.

Maan also dressed in his white 3 piece suit looks like he wants to kill someone with his dating killer looks.

Maan saw her and kissed her...After her confession he kissed her so many time whenever he get time. Geet today knows how much passionate he is....with his only kisses.

Looking sexy

"Shut Up Maan" she didn't expects this at least and feeling coy with him for the first time as she confessed and they goes like perfect couple.

"Let go" he said while kissing her red cheeks and laughs.

Scene Shift

Dev said first word before opening his eyes, "Geet" Meera is so shocked with that

She is hurts so much with his indifferent behaviour.

"Dev" he looks at her strangely with blanched her internally, "Are you fine" still she manage to ask

Sir, if you are not fine then we will postpone today's event.

He is quite.

"I think Dev needs rest" she said

"No, Now I'm alright" he said.

His eyes looks at her with so much accusations.

"Dev"

"I need to go" he said

Scene Shift

(Do listen this song... I'm putting on my blog as I know it's. I know it's punjabi and many of okay all maybe doesn't know punjabi but it is best suited song and this is song which inspire me to write this SS.... And I want to know what will be your comments if I interchange the position of Dev and Maan...actually want to read your comments on this...as I only read Dev is like this or that but want to know, no one feel pity on Dev.....He is never at fault....But let see what is your views)

Scene Shift

"All the best Dev" Geet says a smiles comes on his lips but next moment it's replace with unreadable emotions...

Geet and Maan comes back stage  first to gives him good wishes then they will sit on their seats.

She comes close to him and shocked to know he is drunk...."Dev"she said and he hugs her

"Dev" Maan said roughly

 "Oh sorry She is your wife."  He said I thought she is my wife Geet.

"I'm so sorry.....I'm so sorry" he repeats and went from there with so much accusing filled voice.

Geet fears comes true as she doesn't ignore his voice or words.

Mike is set and all are shunned to saw his condition, Dev never drunk but he is today....What will happen today.

Sir are you fine?

"I'm" he said a word and left to the stage.

Kaash Lyrics

Kaash assi mill jaande, vichore naa aande

He is accusing the person who is responsible for all. He wants the person never leaves him.

Te naina vassde na, te loki hassde naa

He said all are laughing or his own soul laughing on him.

Je aisa ho jaanda, te Rab tera ki jaanda

He is accusing God too why he did this with him....Why?

Oh mera ban janda, main tera ban jaanda

If the person is his only then he will be happy or only blackness is there.

Je dil nu launda na, kade pachtaunda na

He is feeling everyone ditched him and he is alone. He felt like he did mistake to love her.

Ai lagiya laake te baitha chain gawaa

Now he is restless and he will be restless till his last breathe.

Samajh menu aave na kyun ronde zaaro zaar

Now he felt what real pain....is THE scene of them together and happy makes him realised how unbearable pain is this.
Jina de seene de vich vasda koi yaar (x2)

Love only gives pain today he realized that. He knows its destiny fault but why he lost his precious gift.

Lokan diyan gallan utte keeta na yaqeen

He remembers when his parents forced her or he remembers the time when she came to her and wants to say from her eyes but he did not understand that time and now.

Dhokhe saare hunde enj shaklon haseen

He feels like she betrayed him as she didn't wait for him and easily moved on with other.

Dil hi na mile phir kade hun gile

He knows that were together for mare attractions and now it's over.

Muk gayaa soniye ni tera mera scene

And now they both are over with each other coz they are moved on...

Gal hun dil de na wasdi rahi

He recalls the time when she tells him how much she loves him and she loves him for years.

Rohnda reha main tu hansdi rahi

He saw her blushing face with Maan and here he is crying on the other side she lived happily

Muk gayi kahaani hun aaj saadi dil jaani

He believes that their story is over long ago and he is feeling pain or restlessness.

Paira vichon meri ni tu khich lai zameen

She is responsible for his condition. Ground slips from his feet and he doesn't know how he will survive without her.

Samajh menu aave na kyun ronde zaaro zaar

He has tears in his eyes along with person who are listening to him.
Pure pain and his helplessness or restlessness only reflected from his painful voice.

Jina de seene de vich vasda koi yaar (x2)

Geet is now sure, he regains his memory and Maan too....He can feel that... That time and now his voice tells them the real story bit questions is how.

Producer also get shocked coz it's is not the song he was singing today but they get good responses so they are quite.

Todeya hi jiven mera dil soniye

He accused so many people and said today's hos heart break and he feels the pain.

Duniya hi gayi meri hil soniye

His entire world is shaken up with the thought and now he had nothing to live....He lost everything. Which is his?

Vekhdi khudai tu samajh na paayi

He doesn't comprehend what to do and people with listen and can imagine what his condition is.

Tenu vi na jaana kuj mill Soniye

He cursed the people who brings darkness in his life.....They also didn't get happiness in their life.

Jivein aaj roya main tu kal rovegi

Today's he is crying for his fate....which gives him immense pain for life time.

Yaadan vich meri har pal rovegi

He cursed that person also cried for the love one too.

Hath naiyo aane guzre zamaane

Today he is on worst condition but later it will happen to them too.

Hijr di agg vich har pal rovegi

He knows Geet cries for him and today he cried for her but couldn't she wait for him, she moved on so easily.

Tere bin reh laange judaaiyan seh laange

He promised that he will try to survive without her aka person and bear all the betrayal or pain.

Teriyan yaadan de dilaase lai laange

Her memories are enough for him to spend his entire life.

Geet or Maan feels that and the audience too....Today he sung with his heart which shows his pain to all...and bring tears in their eyes.

Dil nu samjha laange te kasama paa laange

He said he will makes himself understand that the person is not more his but someone else. He promised too

Raat-din ro laange par na karaange pyaar

He will cry days or nights for lost his love of his life but he is not able to love someone else now.....He has enough for this life....

Samajh mainu aave na kyun ronde zaaro zaar

All person till now cried and his eyes are also wet with fresh tears which he carries from long back

Jina de seene de vich vasda koi yaar (x2)

He sings last night and fell on his knees....

So many person felt bad for him....Meera, Maan, their parents or Daadi Ma....Everyone life shaken up.....The reality the bitter and it's spread in everyone life and leave it's bitterness.

After ending song he faints on stage....and everyone like shunned......




Ignore Grammatical Mistakes or Other.
I give my 100% in this update and want the same.... Do gimme me more like here or on my blogs I don't care but I want everyone take initiatives or...... I don't write next part....for sure.....That I'll assure you in advance.

Take Care.

Comments

  1. none is at fault it was their destination
    now she had moved on with Maan
    Dev has his own life n a kid to think abt
    forgetting is not easy but sometime to move on u hv to forget even if someone think u r cruel as they don't know d hell u hv been through n the pain u hv went through
    n i love that song
    but i think when geet was waiting for him this songs suits her
    Ijazat by Falak

    Ve jan walia enj chhad ke na javi
    Kite vaade sare oh tor nibavi

    Galan ishq di kitian sang ratan kadia

    Oh bhull na javi meinu chhad na javi...


    Haayeee...
    Haayeee


    Mera yaar sajjan tun dildar sajjan tun

    Meinu kol luka le gal sine la le

    Ghar aja mahi fer na ja mahi

    Tere tarie pava teinu kinj samjava


    Ik wari aja ghar phera paja

    Koi labh ke liade mere dil da ranjha

    Rabb teri khudai mein deva duhai

    Oss bekadre nu meri kadar na aai
    

Bahan kangna pake hathe mehndi lake

    Kanni mundra pake hun kehnu dikhava
    
Chann edi charia tun ghar na mudia

    Rava tak tak teria akhaa rondian meria


    Ve tun samj na paia man ishq machaia

    Ve mein ho gai challi rovan beh ke kalli

    Ve mann le kehna dukh hor ni sehna
    
Deva dil nu tasalli rova beh ke kalli


    Kinj badal gia tun dil khed gia tun

    Hasse hasia de vich dil tod gia tun


    Ve jan walia enj chhad ke na javi

    Kite vaade sare oh tod nibavi

    Galan ishq di kitian sang ratan kadia

    Oh bhull na javi meinu chhad na javi...


    Haayee... Haaayeeee...


    Je hove ijazat teri kara ibadat..



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  2. Destiny is very twisted ands its ways are more unexpected. I really feel pity for dev he he can't blame geet for that as she did have her heart break and now life has given her a second chance. Maan to deserves geet as he was patient in love and truly waited. No one is actually at fault .
    Time is the best healer. It' said when God gives pain, he even gives the strength to endure it.
    I'm being too philosophical in my comments. On whole I loved this update

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  3. WOW!! Outstanding update….I loved it…sorry for late comment... I am not well...just returned to IF after 15 days...

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  4. emotional update...
    one side happy that geet confessed her love to maan n moved on...she is finally happy...
    other side dev got his memories back....feeling really bad for him...noone is at fault,,,its fate who did this,,,,1st he forgot abt geet n when she moved on finally dev got memory back....nobody to blame bt fate...
    hopefully as time healed geeet's wound time will heal dev too....
    Dona(crazyeyes)

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