MG SS: Broken Angel Chapter 5
I know I didn't clear so many things and I have to open up.... Just one more update And I need your full support....READ THIS UPDATE LIKE ANY STORY.....LEAVING CHARACTERS OR OTHERS THINGS.
You all get to know GEET'S WAITING OR A BROKEN ANGEL....DEALING WITH THIS CRUEL SOCIETY.
Listen this songs as this song and broken angel song helps in writing this story....I really don't know how many of you listen or watched that song....But both songs inspire me to pen-down this story.
Aadat/ A Habit
Chapter 5
Geet is sitting in the car moving towards her destination....Shimla. She was thinking about past.
8 Years Ago
MTC School Shimla
"Welcome Mr Khurana" His Principal greets him
"Thank You Mr Oberoi"
"Please Have your seat" he signals him to sit in VVIP area
"Mr Oberoi I don't have much time you know..."
"I am so Thankful to you Sir You give us time...Our function is started soon after Saraavati Vandana and beginning with Geet dance and then your speech"
"I am really sorry Mr Oberoi... I want to stay here but that last time client's sometimes they pressurised us"
"Mr Khurana we know or understand you....Afterall you achieved so much in a very young age after all you are a business tycoon and don't have much time...Still you givea us your precious time."
"Please don't embarrassed me Sir I can do anything for this college and you."
"No My Son I am not embarrassing you but really feel honoured to have you here....You are a shinning star of our school"
"Thank You Sir For The Lovely Comment" He says
The function starts accordingly and then Geet turns is come.
"Baba Ji please stay me safe....now its all upon you....I don't know why I am so nervous.... It's all coz of that chief guest....Please don't forget any steps...I really do work hard." She send quick prayer before hee performance.
Geet first of all given their respect to God then stage and bow down in front pf audience.... Then she starts.
Tu waada kita si ki
Jind teri khushiya naal bhar dau
She chooses a sad song where A girl loves a boy immensely. She lost her mind, body or soul to him and that guy loves her too.
Tu aakhda hunda si ki
Chann tere paira ch dhar dau
He also loves her crazily and promise to fulfil all her deams and if she wished he will bring moon or stars for her.
Na tu waada poora kita
Na tu chann hi lai aaya
But Destiny doesn't want them together and Boy died for some reason. He left her all alone.
Without fulfilling any wish just leaves her with his memories.
Mere kamle dil nu kyon
Tu aiven dukha vich paaya
Her heart which is beating for him only has pain or miseries. She couldn't thinks straight.
Geet and that boy giving their 100 % in that song. She inact so well and the boy also plays so well with her.
Brings tears in everyone eyes. They are in 12 standard but they perform like professional. She has tears in her eyes of separation and brings tears in everyone eyes.
Ki dass majburi pai gayi aa
Now Geet shows how helpless she is and doesn't have anyone who understands her. She shows how the world which look beautiful turn so cruel.
Everyone taking advantage of situation but didn't show any pity upon her.
Later the soul of her lover asked her to moved on with someone who loves her but she was not ready but finally she gave up and throw his everything which let her the time they were together and now she is alone or want to live alone....is same thing.
The other guy helps her to move on with life as it won't stop with someone.
The End
Everyone in podium starts applauding for them with tearful eyes.
His eyes was fixed on her and her each or every move with great administration and respect for her.
The Car stop and she comes out from her past. Now she has tears in her eyes. She never knew she was portraying her future life story but the difference is in that story her lover soul forces her to carry on with her life and moreover that was a drama and this is her life.
Dil mera vi kardah chadd da
Par teri aadat pai gayi aa (x3)
She went to CCD to re-memorising the time she met with him first.
Flashback Starts
"Mumma Nani...What is this....Can't you select a simple coffee"
"Geet bete we didn't come oftentimes with our friends"
"So what.... I asked you to select coffee....That's it"
"Do you see how many types of coffees is mentioned here"
"Let it be....Its waste to ask both of you....I'll select for you....I am giving treat now I'll select what you both will drink" she gets angry on her mother and Grandmother who is taking so much time to book a simple thing. She throw a party as her act was liked by all.
"Excuse Me" Geet went to give order
"Yes, Ma'am"
"Booked 3 Cheese Croissant and 3 Arzet with vanilla ice-cream"
"Okay Ma'am....Here is your order number"
"Thank You" she said and went to sit on her sit. Unaware someone is there whose gaze is fixed on her.
Kaisi ehe doori aa koi hall hi nahi
Ajj vi tu aaya na
Tu aauna kall vi nahi
Geet, her mother and Grandmother aka Nani was waiting for her order but get a shocked of their life.
"Geet" He called her lovingly
Shocked is understatement to find Owner of Khurana is standing in front of her moreover calling her. She saw him yesterday and wants to meet him but who can allowed ordinary girl to meet a big personality okay not ordinary girl but still her family status is not matched with him.
"A....A....A...." she is mummering audibly
"Mr Khurana"
"Sorry Mrs Rathore to scare you all when you all are spending family time"
"No... No... It's not like that But we are surprised to see you" Her mother says
"I am so sorry to come here but its important..."
"Yes but"
"Can I talk to Geet"
"Yes"
"Hello Geet, I am not wasting my time to tell you my name or asking your name as we both knows your name"
"Right" he further added
She nodded innocently without breaking eye contacts with him or they are reading each other emotions from the thing which never tells a lies.
Chitthiya vi paayiya main
Tu taan padheya hi nahi
Kaahda ehe millna je gallan kariya hi nahi
"Geet I lost myself to you last day, now my mind, body or soul is yours without seeking my permission..."
That was sweet pure shocked for her as well as for all and entire people present in CCD looking at him not looking but Gawking at him.
"Geet you never heard anything about me and believe me in college too I was never involved with any girl...Right now I am 24 and took over my family business after my parents demise 3 years before and earn healthy income and fulfill your every wish....
Geet I know I am sounding desperate and very selfish as I know you are in 12 class and I am 24 and very well knew that this is huge gap so I want you think on every aspect before giving me any answer.
Soch soch din mukk jaande
Ve tere laare nahi mukkde
Lakh mana leyaa dil nu
Ve mere hanju nahi rukkde
Ve hun meri jaan te pai gayi aa
Tears comes out from her eyes.
"Geet I Love You....I Love You and I Will Give or Do whatever you want...And Never give you chance if you accept me"
"Yes" she said
We think entire life for knowing what to do or not and we knew it in fraction of second if your heart respons or giving you answer.
She doesn't know why she accept it although she rejected so many proposal or offer in school but she doesn't want to deny him.
"OMG Geet" he gives a little peck on her lips in happiness and get embarrassed too.
Her mother and Grandmother was beyond shocked as well as people gawking at him with open mouth.
"Sorry control over you and believe you are first one..... I swear to my parents... I want to say so many things but I got biggest contract after meeting you so I am leaving for 3 years Geet... I don't ask you to wait for me if you got best proposal, select him over me....But Yes, Geet I promise I'll be back so I adore my parents who only loves each others as they never get enough of each other and thought no one is like them and never thought in my best dream that I ever feel like that as They are best and no one is like them...A man like my father and A woman like my mother but my all views changes when I saw you.... I THOUGHT WE ALSO MAKE BEST COUPLE IF NOT LIKE THEM BUT WE WILL TRY" He said
Geet eyes is like open like saucer and mouth open like someone forced her to eat so many gulab jamum in her mouth. And about others they are are only gawking but only silence prevails their and sometimes gaping or his words echoes their.
"Geet please close your mouth or I don't know what I will do next and you are responsible" she open her eyes more and closed her mouth quickly
"I promise I'll be back and I Love You Geet" he kissed her forehead and drop one kiss on her mother cheek and one kiss on her Nani cheek makes all ladies blush.
"Do think what I said and I respect all of your decision regarding us.....Take Care" He screams and left
"Did he just propose me and kiss me" Geet said after sometime and starts dancing there
Everyone is clapping for her and her mother is also smile perhaps she should get angry but she finds him honest or genuine.
"We Will Wait Mr.............
Flashback End
Dil mera vi kardah chadd da
Par teri aadat pai gayi aa (x3)
Geet cried more over her fate in which Baba Ji writes pain or separation.
Still she is believing his words although she knows DEAD PERSON never come back.
A mystery Solve....I think
Ignore Grammatical Mistake Or Others
Take Care
You all get to know GEET'S WAITING OR A BROKEN ANGEL....DEALING WITH THIS CRUEL SOCIETY.
Listen this songs as this song and broken angel song helps in writing this story....I really don't know how many of you listen or watched that song....But both songs inspire me to pen-down this story.
Aadat/ A Habit
Chapter 5
Geet is sitting in the car moving towards her destination....Shimla. She was thinking about past.
8 Years Ago
MTC School Shimla
"Welcome Mr Khurana" His Principal greets him
"Thank You Mr Oberoi"
"Please Have your seat" he signals him to sit in VVIP area
"Mr Oberoi I don't have much time you know..."
"I am so Thankful to you Sir You give us time...Our function is started soon after Saraavati Vandana and beginning with Geet dance and then your speech"
"I am really sorry Mr Oberoi... I want to stay here but that last time client's sometimes they pressurised us"
"Mr Khurana we know or understand you....Afterall you achieved so much in a very young age after all you are a business tycoon and don't have much time...Still you givea us your precious time."
"Please don't embarrassed me Sir I can do anything for this college and you."
"No My Son I am not embarrassing you but really feel honoured to have you here....You are a shinning star of our school"
"Thank You Sir For The Lovely Comment" He says
The function starts accordingly and then Geet turns is come.
"Baba Ji please stay me safe....now its all upon you....I don't know why I am so nervous.... It's all coz of that chief guest....Please don't forget any steps...I really do work hard." She send quick prayer before hee performance.
Geet first of all given their respect to God then stage and bow down in front pf audience.... Then she starts.
Tu waada kita si ki
Jind teri khushiya naal bhar dau
She chooses a sad song where A girl loves a boy immensely. She lost her mind, body or soul to him and that guy loves her too.
Tu aakhda hunda si ki
Chann tere paira ch dhar dau
He also loves her crazily and promise to fulfil all her deams and if she wished he will bring moon or stars for her.
Na tu waada poora kita
Na tu chann hi lai aaya
But Destiny doesn't want them together and Boy died for some reason. He left her all alone.
Without fulfilling any wish just leaves her with his memories.
Mere kamle dil nu kyon
Tu aiven dukha vich paaya
Her heart which is beating for him only has pain or miseries. She couldn't thinks straight.
Geet and that boy giving their 100 % in that song. She inact so well and the boy also plays so well with her.
Brings tears in everyone eyes. They are in 12 standard but they perform like professional. She has tears in her eyes of separation and brings tears in everyone eyes.
Ki dass majburi pai gayi aa
Now Geet shows how helpless she is and doesn't have anyone who understands her. She shows how the world which look beautiful turn so cruel.
Everyone taking advantage of situation but didn't show any pity upon her.
Later the soul of her lover asked her to moved on with someone who loves her but she was not ready but finally she gave up and throw his everything which let her the time they were together and now she is alone or want to live alone....is same thing.
The other guy helps her to move on with life as it won't stop with someone.
The End
Everyone in podium starts applauding for them with tearful eyes.
His eyes was fixed on her and her each or every move with great administration and respect for her.
The Car stop and she comes out from her past. Now she has tears in her eyes. She never knew she was portraying her future life story but the difference is in that story her lover soul forces her to carry on with her life and moreover that was a drama and this is her life.
Dil mera vi kardah chadd da
Par teri aadat pai gayi aa (x3)
She went to CCD to re-memorising the time she met with him first.
Flashback Starts
"Mumma Nani...What is this....Can't you select a simple coffee"
"Geet bete we didn't come oftentimes with our friends"
"So what.... I asked you to select coffee....That's it"
"Do you see how many types of coffees is mentioned here"
"Let it be....Its waste to ask both of you....I'll select for you....I am giving treat now I'll select what you both will drink" she gets angry on her mother and Grandmother who is taking so much time to book a simple thing. She throw a party as her act was liked by all.
"Excuse Me" Geet went to give order
"Yes, Ma'am"
"Booked 3 Cheese Croissant and 3 Arzet with vanilla ice-cream"
"Okay Ma'am....Here is your order number"
"Thank You" she said and went to sit on her sit. Unaware someone is there whose gaze is fixed on her.
Kaisi ehe doori aa koi hall hi nahi
Ajj vi tu aaya na
Tu aauna kall vi nahi
Geet, her mother and Grandmother aka Nani was waiting for her order but get a shocked of their life.
"Geet" He called her lovingly
Shocked is understatement to find Owner of Khurana is standing in front of her moreover calling her. She saw him yesterday and wants to meet him but who can allowed ordinary girl to meet a big personality okay not ordinary girl but still her family status is not matched with him.
"A....A....A...." she is mummering audibly
"Mr Khurana"
"Sorry Mrs Rathore to scare you all when you all are spending family time"
"No... No... It's not like that But we are surprised to see you" Her mother says
"I am so sorry to come here but its important..."
"Yes but"
"Can I talk to Geet"
"Yes"
"Hello Geet, I am not wasting my time to tell you my name or asking your name as we both knows your name"
"Right" he further added
She nodded innocently without breaking eye contacts with him or they are reading each other emotions from the thing which never tells a lies.
Chitthiya vi paayiya main
Tu taan padheya hi nahi
Kaahda ehe millna je gallan kariya hi nahi
"Geet I lost myself to you last day, now my mind, body or soul is yours without seeking my permission..."
That was sweet pure shocked for her as well as for all and entire people present in CCD looking at him not looking but Gawking at him.
"Geet you never heard anything about me and believe me in college too I was never involved with any girl...Right now I am 24 and took over my family business after my parents demise 3 years before and earn healthy income and fulfill your every wish....
Geet I know I am sounding desperate and very selfish as I know you are in 12 class and I am 24 and very well knew that this is huge gap so I want you think on every aspect before giving me any answer.
Soch soch din mukk jaande
Ve tere laare nahi mukkde
Lakh mana leyaa dil nu
Ve mere hanju nahi rukkde
Ve hun meri jaan te pai gayi aa
Tears comes out from her eyes.
"Geet I Love You....I Love You and I Will Give or Do whatever you want...And Never give you chance if you accept me"
"Yes" she said
We think entire life for knowing what to do or not and we knew it in fraction of second if your heart respons or giving you answer.
She doesn't know why she accept it although she rejected so many proposal or offer in school but she doesn't want to deny him.
"OMG Geet" he gives a little peck on her lips in happiness and get embarrassed too.
Her mother and Grandmother was beyond shocked as well as people gawking at him with open mouth.
"Sorry control over you and believe you are first one..... I swear to my parents... I want to say so many things but I got biggest contract after meeting you so I am leaving for 3 years Geet... I don't ask you to wait for me if you got best proposal, select him over me....But Yes, Geet I promise I'll be back so I adore my parents who only loves each others as they never get enough of each other and thought no one is like them and never thought in my best dream that I ever feel like that as They are best and no one is like them...A man like my father and A woman like my mother but my all views changes when I saw you.... I THOUGHT WE ALSO MAKE BEST COUPLE IF NOT LIKE THEM BUT WE WILL TRY" He said
Geet eyes is like open like saucer and mouth open like someone forced her to eat so many gulab jamum in her mouth. And about others they are are only gawking but only silence prevails their and sometimes gaping or his words echoes their.
"Geet please close your mouth or I don't know what I will do next and you are responsible" she open her eyes more and closed her mouth quickly
"I promise I'll be back and I Love You Geet" he kissed her forehead and drop one kiss on her mother cheek and one kiss on her Nani cheek makes all ladies blush.
"Do think what I said and I respect all of your decision regarding us.....Take Care" He screams and left
"Did he just propose me and kiss me" Geet said after sometime and starts dancing there
Everyone is clapping for her and her mother is also smile perhaps she should get angry but she finds him honest or genuine.
"We Will Wait Mr.............
Flashback End
Dil mera vi kardah chadd da
Par teri aadat pai gayi aa (x3)
Geet cried more over her fate in which Baba Ji writes pain or separation.
Still she is believing his words although she knows DEAD PERSON never come back.
A mystery Solve....I think
Ignore Grammatical Mistake Or Others
Take Care
Nice update dear really Mann proposed to geet in front of her mother and grandmother not only that in front of all and told that he is going to abroad for 3yrs to wait he will come for her
ReplyDeleteawesome update..
ReplyDeleteI don't think the person is maan.
maybe some one from khurana family.
he proposed geet when she was in 12 class. and said her to wait for him ..
loved it
Awesome and emotional update. It is not Maan whom Geet loves. He proposed her in CCD in front of her mother and grandma. Geet accepted his proposal.
ReplyDeleteGosh there is another khurana who died. Aahh, my poor geet. But her mother and Nani were there. Why didn't they support geet in trouble? Oh yes her Nani is friends with daadima, so this is how geet and maan got married. But who is this mysterious person?
ReplyDeleteThis update created a lot of doubts which I'm sure you will clear slowly.
Enjoyed this part
Awesome update
ReplyDeleteSo many mystery in geet who is he maan and so so love it waiting for the next update
ReplyDeleteNice update. That song n her dance story become truth of her life. Flashback is very cute. Mr. Khurana seems to be honest n deeply in love.
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