MG SS: Pretend Chapter 28

Reality


Chapter 28

It's peck on lips, yeah in normal language we can say kiss.... I can't changed coz it already written.

I am so sorry SHIK.LOVEMANEET Sweety... And many more who doesn't like Geet kissed by Reyan... I really feel bad to disappoint you guys but Reyan loves her from long time and got fell for his heart when he come to know about Geet.
Geet verdict on Meet, its bit true when you desperately want something then you forget the practicality and logic's but we definitely realizes later same happen with Geet... She want that time her husband but if Meet comes then she surely will realized mistake..

Tahir thank you for the comment on both, its feel good when you know someone really waiting for updates....

Kshubhangi...I know you are disappointed with AFC but that story bounded to end that way... That way I shift that story on Blog...

Nitika Sweety: When that girl kissed him, Geet was not there so she didn't saw him.

One more thing About Devil House, Jassod Sweety...Maan is not mad at all but you finds him obsessed one.... Its his nature and Geet being key.... I'll disclosed later. 

He is Devil or whatever but only with my hero....My hero is always ends up with my heroine and if I had something else in my mind I shows My hero with other....that not possible at in my past stories or coming too....Except Cage of lust and in that my I shows him with other and you all know the end.... I AM DEVIL I KNOW..... Actually I hate my hero with other than my heroine please bear my writing and spare If You don't like it.

Reyan is not playing Major role but minor ;)

Thank you sweeties for such a beautiful response..... You all made my day....


Happy Reading 


Reyan Soliloquy

Walking on empty road sometimes gives you peace, today I realized it though. I let go my all bad habit being with girls, drinking and my anger but seems like all in vein. I went to her apartment skipping a day only, one day she will come and that day I told her I can't live without her but when she comes so many emotions raised inside me...I can't control my rage and scream on her... I know I am unreasonable and Geet never shows me that I am her friend even but I was so helpless with my heart. For the first time I love someone, dreams about her, how I spend my life with her and how will I love her even and that person don't even know it. Now I know why but what I told to my heart.
Tears fell from my eyes seems like I am a girl who had broke up with someone special.

End Of Soliloquy

Scene Shift

Maan want to discuss with Dev and Annie but all the things will time consuming, only his Dad will help him. He make call to his Dad.

"Hello Dad" Maan cals him after thinking a lot

"What happen Maan" he asked

"Dad I need your help" Maan said

"Tell me Maan" Maan told him everything

"Hmmm I'll call my friend, she will help you"

"In this short notice"

"That's call relationship... A good relationship I must say"

"Thank you Dad" Maan is suspicious that why his Dad didn't raise any questions just ready to help him.
"Does he knows everything before" he thought

"What happen Maan, you are sounding Angry" His Dad asked

"I am not angry Dad...juat tensed"

"Really Maan"

"Good Night Dad"

"Night" he cut the call

Maan is still standing there in foul mood.

Scene Shift

She is calling with someone when she heard her son Reyan voice.

"Mom you are here" Reyan asked wiped his tears

"I thought you will be happy to have me Reyan" he hugs his mother to get some peace to his broken heart

"Reyan you are crying" his mother asked in shocked tone

"Mom she doesn't love me...She is married before and now" Geet told him she is married

"You didn't knew it" she asked

"No, she never told me but she confessed everything today, she told me She married for her mother in law."

"If she doesn't love her husband, she could leave him"

He laughs, "She didn't her first husband or even hate him who cheats her then how could you expect she leave her husband who helps her mother in law case."

"I don't understand her?"

Reyan told her everything and about her case. Mom Geet is not kind of girl, she is very cultured girl, you know... That's why I love her. Mom she is different from other.

"Mom I know it short notice but will you help her in her case.... She doesn't have any lawyer and tomorrow is her hearing... I know you never mixed personal and professional life and only took winning case but I really want I help her once more" he said

"Reyan its very short time" her mother want to something but Reyan think she is denying

"Don't worry I'll talk to Dad, can we bribe them to win that case"

"Reyan you really loves her"

He hugs her, "I do Mom"

"Even though she doesn't loves you back"

"She is not at fault"

"REYAN said that"

"Mom I do and now I know why she doesn't love me, I am paying for past." He has his head on her laps with closed eyes.

"I'll definitely helps her who changed my son whom I can't even makes him understand one simple thing" his mother ruffle his hair

Scene Shift

Maan tries to control his anger standing outside when he saw him moving from her house. He wants to kill him for sure. "Its just peck" his mind says and what about you... You didn't kissed yesterday... I stopped her...
"She also pushed him too" his mind says in her favor

"Why you want to kills him Maan" His Mind said

"She is my wife" his heart said

"Pretended one" his mind said

"Whatever she is my responsibility" his heart say

"She can take care of herself...moreover she knows him." his mind argued back

"Just shut up" Maan scream

"Anybody here" Geet scream from inside and open her door

"Hello Geet" Maan said in not so zealous tone

Geet expect him, "Come inside"

"I thought I've beg in front of you to let me come inside" Maan taunt

Geet is somehow feels strange with his behavior, "What do you want Maan" Geet ignore his taunt and asked him

Maan comes inside and sit on sofa...

"Good Evening Sir"

"Good Evening Rosie" he wish sweetly

What is his problem, why can't he talk to her properly.

"Da Da" little Abhi comes from bed room having his evening sleep.

"You left me alone Abhi"

"Abhi don't leave Da Da"

"Da Da Missed Abhi only so much"

"Abhi missed Da Da" Abhi hugs him and sit on his laps

"No, Abhi loves his Ma Ma more"

Poor Abhi saw him and then his Ma Ma..., "Abhi love Ma Ma and Da Da"

Maan hugs him...He is controlling himself but that idiot image comes in his mind.

Geet is adoring them and little bit scared... Not little bit but she is hell scared and she can even tell him about her fear.

Geet went to kitchen and starts making hot chocolate for all...It's cold here and hot chocolate is best.

Geet is running her mind everywhere but nothing makes sense to her.

Geet cell phone rang. Geet comes with hot chocolate and about to pick the call but Maan picked it up before her.

"Hello Geet, Reyan here... can we meet" a male voice comes from other side and Maan knows he is same b.

Maan whose blood is boiling will explode next moment but his voice makes him stop, "My mother is best lawyer and she is ready for taking your case" he said

Maan knows it is not situation to be mad on him but its action time, "We will be there"

"Sorry who is this"

Geet put the cups on table and about to snatch her cell phone but Maan is fast. He pulls her towards him making her stumbled and she is on him.... Geet somehow managed not to hit Abhi.... "What the hell is his problem" she want to scream

"I am her husband" Maan replied casually

Geet is about to get up but Maan didn't let go of her waist, "Maan" Geet calls him in low voice, "Gimme my phone back" she said when she finds him cutting call.

"Who was at call"

"Your Lover Boy"

Geet narrows her eyes and asked from eyes what he was saying, "He wants to meet us, his mother Maya Reyansh wants to help us"

She is happy to hear that, "That good news"

"We have to leave"

"Fine let go but having this hot chocolate at least" she said

Maan cell phone rang

"Maan my friend Maya Reyansh will help you in this case" Making him shocked

"Same name"

"What"

"She has son"

"Yes Maan"

"Name"

"Reyan"

"Thank You Dad" Maan cut the call

They had their hot chocolate and move to meet her, Geet at first reluctant to go with him but didn't dare to say as he sound angry today.

"Do you have some problem Maan" Geet asked

"You are my problem" his heart want to say

"Nothing"

"I can go alone"

"Why so that you can spend time alone with him" Maan retort back

"Why are you so much irritated with Reyan" Geet asked

"I am not" Maan said, "I come across the entire truth with my own source and I am angry on you" he confessed

Geet thought its coz she hides thing from him.

They reached his house, "Rocky please don't wait here, its cold here, you better leave"

"How you will manage Ma'am"

"We will take Cab"

"I am going but please Ma'am call me whatever the time is" he said

Scene Shift

"Hello Maan", "Hello Geet, I am glad to meet you Again" She wished them

"Good Evening Maya"

They settle down and Geet starts narrating her situation.


Reyan sit there and continuously staring at Geet which irked Maan so much. Geet was used to of his nature.

"You tell him what" Maan asked in shocked tone when she told her about the meeting with Paul.

"Reality"

"Reality... Really Geet"

"He is strict person we can't manipulate him"

"Why you open your mouth after messing up everything"

"What I messed up"

"I have list" Maan retort back he is angry for so many reasons

"Just tell me what comes first"

"I am not interested to tell you"

"Why you are in grumpy mood" she asked as she fed up why he talking rude

"Maan...Geet... You will continue later but Geet at least you should talk to your elder" she said

"But Maya I don't think this thing matter in our case"

"Yeah but"

"How can you be sure Geet what matter or what's not"

"Maan I thought he understands me"

"Did he?"

"Will you both please stop fighting now" Maya said

"Sorry Maya, If I messed up things"

"I thought you gave brain Geet but" Maan said in low tone near her ear

"I've brain and I proved so many times" Geet retort back in same low tone

"Typical Husband and Wife" Maya comments

"Maya we can proof that I am Meet"

"Yes it is Bollywood movie, they won't got for your Medical check up"

"Idiot We can bribe some of them"

"If they are so much honest then Mr INTELLIGENT Singh Khurana"

"Do you have other idea"

"Nope"

"Can't you tell me before" Maan asked irritating voice

"I don't want to burden you" Geet answer, "You already done so much for me"

"I don't want to burden you" he mock and Geet pout for the first time in front of him which melt his angry jealous heart. He want to kiss her....( He cribs in his heart.) God this girl makes me crazy.

"Geet do you know Kate Smith"

"Not very well"

"I have details about him" Maan said

"That great Maan" she said

Maan told her about everything which details he has with him.

"Geet, Rathore property belongs Abhinav"

"Anupuma Mamma and Abhi, I send back everything on their name Maya"

"Geet it good or bad...both" she said

They are still discussing every minor and major things.

Scene Shift

"Mom, Do you think Maya will help them or we approach someone else" Amar Singh Khurana discuss with her

"Don't worry Amar, I already someone....We will won the case"

Flashback

"Dr Meera I know you know everything" Savitri asked after Abhi operation get successful

"I don't understand what you are saying Mrs Khurana"

"Really Meera"

"Yes" she Stammer

"Geet is your friend and you very well knows what I am asking"

"Mrs Khurana, Geet doesn't like if someone talk about her" she said

"I appreciate"

"I am not going to tell anything" she said and Daadi smile

"If you don't help me we can't help her", "Think about it"

she left Meera

Meera run after her.

"Mrs Khurana" she asked

"Can we talk in my cabin"

"Call me Daadi first"

"Yes Daadi"

They enter her room once again.

"What kind of help Daadi"

"You want to see her Happy"

"Of-Course"

"Tell me about her"

"How you will help her?"

"You will find it later, that promise...." Meera told her everything about Geet.

"Meera you will see a happy Geet after some time" she said

"Ummmmm.....If you fail"

"I never fail Meera"

"But"

"Don't worry, Its all coz of Geet"


Ignore Grammatical Mistakes Or Other Errors
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Comments

  1. awesome update...
    maan father talked to his Friend who is Ryan mother..
    she is ready to help geet.but it's difficult.
    maaneet fighting like husband wife..
    loved it

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  2. wao awesome......
    maaneet figting uffff.....

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  3. bhulbhulaiya......story has so many phase that i lost in bhulbhulaiya....one side Reyan-maya, Maan and dad...and on the top it is now dadima and meera,what going on...?

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  4. Nice update dear Mann call his dad and told about the sutivation and asked help if he can do anything and he told that his friends will help them and its maya Reyna there discussion the case and thought of the possibility it's so cute that Mann and geet argument

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  5. Zigzag puzzle.
    Loving the fact Maan helping out Geet with Dad and Daddi doing her investigation with Meera.

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  6. Zigzag puzzle.
    Loving the fact Maan helping out Geet with Dad and Daddi doing her investigation with Meera.

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  7. Zigzag puzzle.
    Loving the fact Maan helping out Geet with Dad and Daddi doing her investigation with Meera.

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  8. WOW!!superb update dear...loved it

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  9. wow,so daadi knew about geet. the story is getting more interesting

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